big girls dont cry so
she kept the secret close and
let it consume her
her eyebrows are gone
shaved them in a fit of rage
filled them in later
wheat thins are like crack
they wont let go of my soul
i wont drop the bag
Sanity
the hold: tenuous
i'm not sure how much longer
i can hang on for
Piece
take what you must but
leave me intact so that i
live to breathe again
Goliath
im still waiting for
your loincloth to fly up and
reveal your blue balls
i'm not a poet
yet my soul speaks melodies,
a friend once told me
i remember when
i knew not what hate was, Then.....
reality struck
fingers linger.sigh
hands trace form and i shudder
never felt this way
unfettered passion
eyes that dare me to bare all
i do.uncertain
i see you when i
look into the mirror and
it frightens me
you never knew love
never showed me any and
maybe you just can't
there aint no way i'm
dancing a jig for nobody
i won't play the fool
you listen when they
tell you that you're of no worth
then believe their lies
i got you sucka
thought you could escape my wrath
ha.well think again
WRITE YOUR OWN
line one: 5 syllables
line two: 7 syllables
line three: 5 syllables
Music: vernacular of the soul
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
I do Hi Coo
Posted by dejanae at 12:30 AM
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16 public opinion:
uhmm,.... i will be back
dej Piece is my fav
You are very talented. I love Piece as well and the one about hate.
living life for others
has taken its toll. Now I'm
living life for me
You had me confused for a minute. I thought it all went together and then it hit me like a ton of bricks! A series of haiku(s).
Now excuse me while I go flog myself for my incompetence.
I don't have one- but I heard the best haiku EVA!!! on def poetry jam by Kent Foreman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JuebZc4YYJ0 (start at 2:55)
I have to agree Piece is my fav' as well...hmmm...I wanna participate..but Im blocked for some reason.
Still loved it though.
Good stuff, dejanae. Damn good stuff.
i remember when
i knew not what hate was, Then.....
reality struck
Co-sign.
I have to sit and gather my thoughts on poetry, but I easily can come with a little freestyle real life prose.
stressed out, test out
never put the sess out
blame it on my childhood
didnt always take the best route
life is like a deathbout
battle on the edge
took it straight to the head
and i remember what they said
its just a shame
many brothers stuck with the pain
no future, no hopes, no dreams
just a part of a game
so who to blame...the white man?
im tired of that frame
i will be your strength
when you are weak
your eyes when you seek
but dont creep
these snake and fakes
they try to infiltrate, blind you
so if you get lost
i wont find you
I am totally not competing with yours!..lol..It was fabulous by the way :)
you need a cold shower!!!
-karrie b.
Deep! I love how you capture your emotions in so little words. This was something special!
anu:
ima be here
paj:
thnx
preciate it
dollface:
aww shucks
thank you for actually haikuin it unlike all these other bastards
mad-dad:
i know ur kinda slow on the uptake
you into S&M?
id be happy to oblige
desy:
ha
i caught that one too
he spoke the truth
ms lady:
hmmmm
blocked huh?
grimace
u get a pass cuz u provided a compliment
don:
u just gon flip the rules for urself huh?
good stuff nonetheless
sha boog:
ha
aint no bootleg competition
hit me wit a lil something
karrie:
that i do
what's the female equivalent of blue balls?
watever that is
i got it
miz:
*blushes*
gracias hon
This cold ass office
Has my brain all deep frozen
now my wit is lost
Ok... i'm too hungover to do my own but I wanted to say that i love love love yours...
oh and that pic by merrill that you have after reality struck... I have that in my bathroom... does that make me a freak?
sula:
poor chile
ur excused
eb:
thnx
nah
just mean you got good taste
and are in touch with your sensuality
nice, need some twine or rope
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